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Challenge: Perspective VIII (Standard Editing)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Canon EOS-6D
Lens: Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM
Location: Local Street
Date: Jul 6, 2016
Aperture: 22.0
ISO: 800
Shutter: 1/100
Date Uploaded: Jul 6, 2016

 I offer this composition for the challenge. In fact, I thought to use the railway track but a train composition was dull. So I waited until a freight train going to take a perspective angle.

Hoping to receive your feedback

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 07/15/2016 06:00:14 AM
Hello from the critique club

A documentary image that somewhat meets the challenge

Your image is a somewhat straight-forward recording of a passing train that shows perspective through the receding scale of the distant engine. The variety of rolling stock adds a little more interest but what spoils it are the wires to the right, these really should have been cloned out they do not add to the image at all. The sky feels generally a little lack lustre and in need of more contrast. As regards the train itself I think you could have given it more impact through the use of motion blur with a very slow shutter speed.

Thanks for your entry Marcel, sorry you didn’t get feedback during the challenge, I hope this makes up for it.
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