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02/15/2003 11:51:49 PM |
Critique Club Critique
Composition/Content: When I first looked at the image, it looked like a person blowing a large bubble like one would with bubble gum. It looks like the bubble has a light in it. The center of attention is the white spot in the middle of the bubble. With the light being in focus and the person's face not in focus it is difficult to determine what the image is trying to convey. The two lines in the lower left are distracting.
Lighting: The red light makes the image interesting.
Camera Work/Technical Exposure is good. I would like to have seen the face in focus instead of the light.
My Opinion: I would like to have seen the whole picture in focus and more centered. |
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02/04/2003 08:00:27 PM |
| Guess I'm not familiar with this particular "cliche". Feels unbalanced with the blinding white light on the bottom and all the dark on the top. Makes me feel like I do when a car is approaching me with it's brights on, I just want to look away. |
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02/04/2003 07:14:49 PM |
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02/04/2003 07:12:12 PM |
| love the color. nice concept. the bright spot is just a little too bright for my eyes and the red lines on the left sort of distract me. |
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