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Hvalnes,  april 10,  5.45am.
Hvalnes, april 10, 5.45am.
EgillP


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Challenge: Free Study 2016-04 (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Sony Alpha a7
Lens: Olympus 24mm f:2.8 Zuiko W.
Location: Iceland
Date: Apr 10, 2016
Aperture: f8,0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/25
Date Uploaded: Apr 30, 2016

Just before sunrise, with my back toward the dawn.

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05/08/2016 06:41:04 AM
Hello from the Critique club

An interesting image that makes contributes well to the free challenge

A very appealing landscape that shouts Iceland! What really gives this image its impact are the tiny buildings at the foot of the immense hills behind them. Because of that I think the composition could have been substantially improved to emphasise that aspect of the image much more effectively. I find myself very distracted by the two posts and their reflections, they are negating the effect that you are after so I would crop them out completely in favour of more of the hill on the right. Also, I would remove the immediate land in the foreground in favour of the water, this again would emphasise the tiny nature of the buildings in relation to their surroundings. I think if you had stood nearer the water and tilted your camera down to include more water and less sky this would have improved the overall result.

Thanks for your entry Egill
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05/07/2016 10:24:16 PM
the tiny buildings set off the super nature of the landscape. and the darkness and the slim maintenance of light here and there.
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