|Greetings from the Critique Club!
Oh, Marcel, I am afraid that this is a little bit of a misstep. Technically it's quite a good image, well lit, with well-defined rubber bands (though some in the bottom third or so are getting soft), but it's simply too literal, and at this stage in his career, Bowie was not literal in his lyrics. The multitude of bands leads the eye all over the place, it needs to stop and settle somewhere. It may have been a better idea to read the lyrics and try to illustrate a line from the song, or if really stuck, go with a better known song.
I did say that this was a misstep but you're definitely on a journey! Keep up the good work and keep on entering.