Greetings from the Critique Club!
This image could be much more closely cropped and some thought put into the available light and composition. Once again this just looks like a snapshot, taken without any effort to get a well-exposed and compositionally interesting photo. There is handshake evident meaning that you shot at far too slow a shutter speed - if you read any of my previous critiques on your images, you would know that I mentioned shooting at a faster shutter speed for handheld work. Any slower than 1/40 or so handheld and it shows.
Lots of blown-out white on the sash and tons of noise everywhere except on the eyelids.
Susan |