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10/23/2015 09:36:50 AM |
Hello from the Critique Club
An interesting image that meets the challenge.
Yep, there's certainly no mistaking that is well and truly a diagonal! I would concur with your commenters remarks. Although the slide dominates all too clearly the background is also rather too busy. Given the wide angle lens you are using a shallow DOF is not really possible in which case a different viewpoint would have been more effective. I think given the lovely sky I would have gone for a lower viewpoint isolating the slide against the sky and removing the ground level background distractions completely, this would have given it more impact. As it is it is really a family snapshot recording a day out with the kids on a slide, you need more than that to make an impact here.
Thanks for your submission, Sid |
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10/21/2015 07:18:00 PM |
| Certainly in your face diagonal which I feel could have benefited from better light (earlier or later in the day) and a shallower DoF. |
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