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Challenge: Diagonal II (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Olympus PEN E-PL3
Lens: Olympus M. Zuiko Digital ED 14-42mm f/3.5-5.6 II
Location: Lyon Family Farms in Taft, TN
Date: Oct 10, 2015
Aperture: 3.5
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/640
Date Uploaded: Oct 15, 2015

This was taken out at the Lyon Family Farms. Nice place to take the kids. My nephew was about to go down this slide. I also eventually went down it. Pretty fun.

I had to clone out a lady. And I tweaked the colors. But nothing extraordinary.

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Place: 49 out of 56
Avg (all users): 5.1833
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 5.2424
Avg (non-participants): 5.1111
Views since voting: 186
Views during voting: 87
Votes: 60
Comments: 2
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10/23/2015 09:36:50 AM
Hello from the Critique Club

An interesting image that meets the challenge.

Yep, there's certainly no mistaking that is well and truly a diagonal! I would concur with your commenters remarks. Although the slide dominates all too clearly the background is also rather too busy. Given the wide angle lens you are using a shallow DOF is not really possible in which case a different viewpoint would have been more effective. I think given the lovely sky I would have gone for a lower viewpoint isolating the slide against the sky and removing the ground level background distractions completely, this would have given it more impact. As it is it is really a family snapshot recording a day out with the kids on a slide, you need more than that to make an impact here.

Thanks for your submission, Sid
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10/21/2015 07:18:00 PM
Certainly in your face diagonal which I feel could have benefited from better light (earlier or later in the day) and a shallower DoF.
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