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Long Day On the Scooter
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Challenge: Self Portrait with Wheels (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-10D
Lens: Canon EF 24-85mm f/3.5-4.5 USM
Location: Sidewalk in front of house
Date: Sep 7, 2015
Aperture: 3.4
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/125
Date Uploaded: Sep 8, 2015

Shot as the sun was going down on with the camera on timer in order to get in the shot.

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Place: 25 out of 33
Avg (all users): 5.1630
Avg (commenters): 0.0000
Avg (participants): 5.3158
Avg (non-participants): 5.1233
Views since voting: 233
Views during voting: 198
Votes: 92
Comments: 1
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09/16/2015 06:38:58 AM
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*

A fairly straightforward shot that meets the challenge.

Your entry is a normal sort of portrait that feels as though the scooter has been included to conform with the challenge brief, in other words it not a particularly inspiring sort of shot to be honest. We are not able to see your eyes 'the window of the soul' and as such it leaves us feeling somewhat let down. The one redeeming quality is the quality of the light, taken during the golden hour it has given the image an appealing golden glow. I like your composition and the way you are looking into the empty part of the frame as opposed to being boringly stuck in the middle of the frame.

I think a more dynamic sort if image would have been to have taken a shot of you riding the scooter which may have fared better for you. It's a shame you didn't get any comments during the challenge, I hope this critique makes up for it, Sid.


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