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02/05/2003 07:12:18 PM |
Critique Club Comment:
A nice idea. Your layout and the tech look of the writing is pleasing to the eye. I do feel that the lighting or white balance may be off some. An adjustment in post processing for this as well as an unmask sharpen would help the white towel jump out at the viewer more. I like the texture in the clip and wood of the board.
Compositionally I feel this is a strong picture, some minor post processing work and this picture would stand strong.
-danny |
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02/02/2003 06:46:29 PM |
| right idea.. but not very good lighting. |
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01/31/2003 01:59:03 PM |
| I like the clipboard idea. The color contrast is nice. |
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01/30/2003 02:41:29 PM |
| This picture looks very cool! I can see the image of a square on the paper, although the tilted angle seems a bit disturbing. The lines that are created by the pen and the drawing of the square causes the photo to look very abstract. |
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01/30/2003 02:39:14 PM |
Composition: Good
Technical: Nice colour/focus
Meets challenge: Yes
Overall impression: Simple but effective. 7 |
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01/29/2003 08:18:53 PM |
| Well, there's a square, and a definition, so I guess you meet the challenge. I'm a bit tired of seeing entries like this, though - not a lot of originality. |
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01/29/2003 05:56:09 PM |
| Third time is not a charm, it is 2 times to many. Didn't appreciate the writing before and still don't. Could have gotten several good shots in the time it took to do this. |
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01/28/2003 07:42:14 PM |
| original!, maybe an other background would have helped |
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01/28/2003 04:51:26 PM |
| Well, it is square, nicely composed (and neat legible writing!). Could have done with better lighting and a posher pen. |
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01/28/2003 12:28:45 PM |
| Nice handwriting! Creative idea and you pulled it off! |
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01/27/2003 08:35:29 PM |
| someonje does this every week. |
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01/27/2003 10:22:30 AM |
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01/27/2003 01:01:28 AM |
| I got to give you a 10 just for creativity alone! |
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