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02/09/2003 06:53:58 PM |
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Compostion/Content Interesting subject but I also think it could use something else to set off the waffle. Maybe not quite so close and a pat of butter or some syrup. It's a good closeup and meets the challenge but lacks that 'Wow' something. Maybe even some whipped cream on it, not really sure.
Camera Work/Technical Excellent focus and exposure.
Overall Opinion Meets the challenge, looks good and appetizing, but could use something else to set it off. Another idea might be to get closer and create an abstract out of it or use more dramatic lighting to create shadows and depth. Nice shot! |
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02/03/2003 09:25:03 AM |
A Dempster's Bakery Waffle - fresh, not frozen. And sad to say, that is really the color of them!! Sort of a nice appetite-inducing orange.
Since the challenge was "square" I thought I would try to get one square of the waffle in focus and the rest of the photo a bit out of focus. I don't really think maple syrup would help with meeting the challenge.
Thanks for the comments!!
Message edited by author 2003-02-03 09:25:16. |
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02/02/2003 09:24:51 PM |
| great work, bonus points for not using a superfluous border. |
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02/02/2003 09:31:44 AM |
| Needs something more too attract the attention such as a drizzle of maple sirup or any other eye catching detail. Good lines. |
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02/02/2003 07:35:25 AM |
| Excellent colour here. I love the shadows and composition. Ths soft effect works well too. Looks like you had fun with this. GL |
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02/01/2003 03:25:04 PM |
| Nice shot - like the focus composition very much - definately meets challenge - high score :) |
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01/29/2003 05:32:20 PM |
| I love the texture in this image, and it has succeeded in making me hungry! |
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01/29/2003 10:13:24 AM |
| you image looks very nice but it isn't very creative. Good work however. |
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01/28/2003 11:24:45 PM |
| Nice macro and most definitely a square! Seems a bit too orange but a nice shot. |
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01/28/2003 07:35:10 PM |
| mmmm!!! waffles!! great macro! |
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01/28/2003 12:04:53 PM |
| Nice macro. Very clear shot. |
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01/28/2003 02:35:05 AM |
| Makes me want to have some! Great close-up shot! |
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01/27/2003 10:41:16 PM |
| Good texture and color. Nice. |
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01/27/2003 09:47:29 PM |
| I think if you would of had the whole waffle in focus, it would be better. The upper right corner is out of focus. jgillard6 |
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01/27/2003 01:57:19 PM |
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01/27/2003 10:58:00 AM |
I almost did this exact same shot!!!!!! I love it
top scores from me |
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01/27/2003 09:46:18 AM |
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