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02/04/2003 03:45:51 PM |
| Using the images you have choosen I see three possible ways to present this picture. 1, To have a posed picture exactly like you did. You see this type of image in many advertisements. 2, Have a more candid shot where your sister is not looking directly into the camera. 3. Move your sister into the dark area where she is just visible, perhaps the light just hitting her face, this would add mystery to the image. I prefer the candid shot or the mystery shot in challenges like this. Where your image works great in the family album, or as an advertizement for cloths. The colors are vibrant, the image is sharp and the composition is good. Keep up the good work and good luck on your current challenges. john gill |
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02/02/2003 10:09:29 PM |
| good, clear focus and detail. nice colors and beautiful subject. well done! |
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02/02/2003 08:19:35 PM |
| I like the old barn wood, and the fact that the background behind her is completely black. Gives the shot a nice crisp feel. |
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02/02/2003 05:31:44 PM |
| Great old barn, but don't think those 2 boards will hold much in. Love to have some of that wood to redo my family room inside. Beautiful model in a beautiful photo. Great job. |
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02/02/2003 02:35:36 PM |
| Cool photo. I like the framing and the pose your sister is in. It shows a lot of familiarity with her, and brings out her personality, as well as the rustic charm of the old building. Nice work. |
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01/29/2003 10:33:44 PM |
| Good picture and I'm glad someone was not afraid to put a person into their image. I think that makes the photo more appealing. The lighting on your sisters face is a little harsh. A little post editing to tone that down might have helped. (8) |
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01/29/2003 06:14:30 PM |
| Not a bad picture. Model has broken wrists. That is good non static pose |
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01/29/2003 09:59:12 AM |
| excellent use of thirds, love the horse shoe and her outfit... 10 |
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01/27/2003 09:20:04 PM |
| the girl seems to be in a strange position, leaning down or forward too much. |
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01/27/2003 05:27:09 PM |
| Very nice image.... This should be framed for her... great job. |
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01/27/2003 02:28:32 AM |
| a real person! in an incredible door! nice shot. |
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