|Good concept nicely presented with well executed composition. This appears as though it may have been buzzed or simplified, processes which I greatly enjoy - normally. The degree to which this as been simplified leaves the image, for me, feeling pixelated. And, I think, it is due to the inherent coarseness of the ribbon's threads. I wonder if MORE simplification would smooth out those hard squares and lend to a more flowing impression? Nonetheless, the form and lines are topnotch, it is the "texture" that just didn't work for me.
Please do not be offended by reaction; remember, abstract photography is an art form, subject to the viewer's emotions. Regardless of my experience with the overall texture, I think your eye is very good for this type of work. So, quite sincerely, I wish you good luck with the image.