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Challenge: Free Study 2015-04 (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix X100S
Location: Allamuchy NJ
Date: Apr 4, 2015
Aperture: 4.5
ISO: 200
Shutter: 80
Date Uploaded: Apr 30, 2015

my version of eye candy. b/w in camera, but I still did calculations to create an overlay effect.

Stephens State Park

Statistics
Place: 128 out of 147
Avg (all users): 5.0494
Avg (commenters): 8.0000
Avg (participants): 5.0517
Avg (non-participants): 5.0435
Views since voting: 240
Views during voting: 136
Votes: 81
Comments: 3
Favorites: 0


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07/13/2015 03:56:49 PM
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*

Sadly, an undervalued image worthy of a much higher score than it received. It displays good creative vision and your title adds another dimension.

I am unfamiliar with your post-processing technique but I always prefer to do my mono conversion in PS. Whatever your technique is it has made, what I suspect was probably a mediocre mono image from the camera into a much stronger image.

The problem with the in-camera mono option is that it throws all of your valuable colour data away thus severely limiting your options, in particular colour filters, which is where all of your tonal possibilities are held.

The foreground leaf grabs your attention and lets you explore the other underwater debris nearby, your eye is then naturally led up the boulder to those absolutely gorgeous ripples after feasting on those slowly drifting up and out of the top of the image. You have a lovely, near full, range of tones, with detail in all areas from the darkest shadows to the bright highlight of the ripple.

Its sad that it scored so low but how on earth anyone can possibly justify the sub fours is way beyond my comprehension, they have managed to completely distort the end result, you have my sympathy.

More of the same please, Sid
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05/08/2015 09:25:23 PM
Wow I gave this a 9, I thought and still think this is outstanding.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/07/2015 09:25:09 PM
All shimmery…reminded me of a French song of the 70s
"Mon amour est comme une eau qui coule claire
Qui t'apporte la montagne et la forêt"…..

bump
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