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10/31/2004 06:01:34 PM |
returning for comments:
great. The dance of the cranes. lol Bumping up. |
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10/29/2004 03:46:40 PM |
| Great background but distracting foreground: less would be more. Tone overall seems a bit on the light side. |
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10/29/2004 12:13:32 AM |
| Love the cranes, but the foreground is a bit cluttered. |
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10/28/2004 04:40:51 PM |
| I love the symmetry and the obvious implied lines. I like the tones used and I like the simplicity of the shot. Or should I say the almost simplicity because what I don't like is the boat / ship in the foreground cluttering things up and partly obscuring the dock wall and cranes on the other side. Also having the skyline almost exactly across the midpoint of the shot is not a good idea. It also cuts the cranes in half. I'm not sure if any of these things was within your control, (I wasn't there), but if they were that's how, in my opinion, the shot could have been improved. Its still worth a six though, well done. |
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10/28/2004 03:55:54 PM |
| Too bad about the text on the boat/barge. It really pulls the eye away from the symetry of the crane booms. Should have either cropped or cloned it out. Lovely tones in your photo. |
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10/27/2004 04:12:17 PM |
| I really like this but think it would have been even better in color |
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10/26/2004 07:24:09 PM |
| Excellent composition and tones. Perfect for te challenge. |
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10/26/2004 12:36:18 PM |
| Well done... bit busy but good compozition. I like toning aswell. |
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10/25/2004 08:14:28 PM |
| Nice photo, maybe crop a bit of the busy foreground out to help the eye focus on the subject better. |
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10/25/2004 07:17:14 PM |
| I really like those creatures. The composition is good but I find the foreground a bit to distracting. |
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10/25/2004 01:29:53 PM |
| I would have prefer to see onlt the top half. The lower one doesn't contribute to the photo, IMHO. Nice shot tho. |
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10/25/2004 10:29:41 AM |
| I think this would have been a lot better if you had cropped out the bottom of this photo and left only the tops of the highest roof the hills and the cranes. Heck they might of even asked for you to validate it assuming you cloned the cranes to get them so perfectly lined up... |
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