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Challenge: Inspired by jjbeguin (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Fujifilm X-T1
Lens: Fujifilm XF 50-140mm f2.8 R LM OIS WR
Location: Hertfordshire
Date: Mar 6, 2015
Aperture: 2.8
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/2700
Date Uploaded: Mar 11, 2015

A snap while trying out the 50-140, Not had chance to get out with the camera in a while

Statistics
Place: 15 out of 71
Avg (all users): 6.1304
Avg (commenters): 7.2500
Avg (participants): 5.9091
Avg (non-participants): 6.5200
Views since voting: 237
Views during voting: 163
Votes: 69
Comments: 10
Favorites: 0


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07/30/2015 08:46:01 AM
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*

A candid shot that appears to meet the challenge.

Without spending more time than I have exploring JJBeguin's images I have to admit that I am not familiar enough with his work to be able to judge your entry in the context of his work/the challenge brief, hence, I assume it meets the challenge. However, I do have the benefit of all your commenters who obviously approve and seem to agree that it is in his style.

For myself, I am here to give you my honest opinion, and as an image in its own right I am not very attracted to it. You describe it as a snap which is how it feels to me, a grab shot that could be improved upon. I'm not really sure I want to see someone eating their takeaway in public and two people in the soft background that are obviously an intentional part of the composition but for me they do not add to the story whatever that may be.

I'm sorry I can't appreciate your image as much as everyone else appears to but I am obviously in the minority and glad that others here appreciate it in the way you intended, well done, Sid.
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03/20/2015 08:57:54 AM
I really like this, MAK! Great job!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/19/2015 09:27:34 PM
Unexpected lunchtime intensity. Good catch.
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03/19/2015 05:14:29 PM
Was always jealous to the deductive abilities of Sherlock Holmes, Auguste Dupin and others! They would have told everything about this girl looking at your photo. :-)
It tells the story even to me.
Nice catch! 8
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03/19/2015 04:48:31 PM
Man, I wish she was facing the other way. 7
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03/19/2015 09:20:28 AM
Great story-telling tension here -- a woman concentrates on eating her hot lunch while two zombies saunter closer out of the background. Just the well-noticed, quirky slant that makes this image a fine homage.
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03/17/2015 06:15:37 PM
Looks like there will be some “Candy Crush” for desert as well. nicely composed altogether. I’m not so sure about shallow DOF for street photography. In such mundane scenes, giving more visibility to the surroundings to contextualize is a plus I think.
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03/14/2015 12:03:34 PM
Yes! I think this could BE his! Great job!
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03/14/2015 10:23:02 AM
Wonderful composition. Great candid. Well done.
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03/13/2015 09:23:19 PM
Lovely street shot, beautiful DOF and composition, splendid grey scale
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