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02/09/2003 08:27:15 AM |
Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) I find the layout of this photograph to be very strong. The goldball is off center in its placement just enough to add visual appeal rather than being static. The shadow of the golf ball is the perfect balance.
(2) BACKGROUND The background is very plain, which make the whites and textures of your golf ball really "pop". Background exposure is perhaps a bit uneven.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL The focus is very crisp. Exposure leaves a little burn out in the top of the golfball which is rather distracting. The shadow behind and under the golf ball add a certain depth to the photograph which is very nice.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL Your post processing is very good. Saturation is good, cropping is perfect.
(5)MEETING THE CHALLENGE This photo does not meet the challenge in my opinion. This same photograph entered into a more appropriate challenge would have done alot better.
(6) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO The subject here is good. The way you executed it is very good. |
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02/01/2003 11:51:32 PM |
| Nice picture of a golf ball, but a little too far out of the box. |
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02/01/2003 10:10:15 PM |
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02/01/2003 04:43:33 PM |
| NOPE, not a square in site |
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02/01/2003 02:50:52 AM |
| funny! only you could get away with getting anything but a one on a shot in a "squares" photo contest with no square! |
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01/30/2003 08:21:35 PM |
| I really don't know where the square fits in, but I'll give you a 6 because I love golf balls (I'm a golf maniac). The white on the ball looks a little too harsh. Jacko. 6 |
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01/30/2003 02:20:59 PM |
| I like the photograph, but I'm not sure how it is an evolved square. |
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01/29/2003 08:08:59 PM |
| It's round, not square. I don't feel this photo meets the challenge. |
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01/29/2003 05:33:37 PM |
| I looked everywhere and couldn't find a square! Nice golf ball, I think! |
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01/29/2003 05:23:10 PM |
| nice photo. where are the squares? |
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01/29/2003 09:05:28 AM |
| I love golf, but this is no square. jgillard2 |
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01/27/2003 10:30:08 PM |
| Thinking out of the box, I can feel that. I like the contrast and the lighting. Nice photo. |
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01/27/2003 10:01:32 PM |
| This on emade me laugh, Great shot |
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01/27/2003 03:26:03 PM |
| Great lighting. Wish the background were more uniformed so as not to break up that great lighting. |
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01/27/2003 11:47:36 AM |
| Good idea, and cool lighting. But why did you let the ball burn out on the top? I think you could have pulled the exposure down by at least half a stop, and gotten a far more impact-full image. (6) |
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01/27/2003 12:22:09 AM |
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01/27/2003 12:21:37 AM |
| how many evolutionary leaps is this? |
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