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08/08/2015 10:37:41 AM |
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
A lovely bird study that meets the challenge well.
This is a very competent bird shot, with good sharp focus on the eye with good feather detail throughout. Your chosen aperture isolates the bird well from the background. I find the portrait orientation gives the bird too little space to look into with too much extraneous space above and below. Perhaps a landscape with the bird in the same position but with more space to look into might have worked better? There is a lot of twiggery but there's not a lot you could do about that.
I am here to give you my honest and critical opinion and there are a couple of relatively minor things I would have altered. I'm thinking it was probably snowing at the time? It's a shame it wasn't heavier but there are three white spots that stand out, I think they would have been better to be cloned out completely. The other is the twig immediately behind the end of the birds beak, I think again, I would have cloned this out too.
It's a nice exposure with good detail on the bird and the background highlight is not too overblown and distract, all in all a very good attempt, Sid |
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03/01/2015 11:48:33 PM |
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03/01/2015 11:01:13 PM |
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02/28/2015 08:58:06 AM |
| There are two of these in this challenge. And the location looks similar. Joint photowalk? |
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02/24/2015 07:53:45 PM |
Not voting in this at all, commenting only..
I love seeing these birds, I have not lately in my neck of the woods. Nice capture |
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02/23/2015 11:10:29 AM |
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