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02/09/2003 08:27:42 PM |
Critique Club Assignment:
Initial: Good idea!
Composition: Placement of the objects is done well. Green attracts the eye, which is then led to the open box, and then down to the sign.
Technical: The background should be whiter.. perhaps better lighting and increasing the exposure value would be helpful if you have the ability to do that.
Overall: I like it, and personally scored it well because of the idea. Still, it would've scored higher if the technical aspects were tuned better. Great job! Look forward to more! ;0) |
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02/02/2003 09:16:23 PM |
| This would have been great for the cliche challenge. Very interesting......very clear.....I like it.... |
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02/02/2003 03:37:10 PM |
| Well done intellectual comment. I should give you a 10 just for that (haha). The spanky colors certainly attract lots of attention. But my fav visual element is the really cool color contamination among the shadows from multiple lights. The subtle color interplay among reflections form the silver part and green casts from the upper lid are simply mahvelous my dear. Good tight composition and suitable DOF. Superior creative input deserves much applause. Great show! |
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02/02/2003 06:27:01 AM |
| Humerous. I wish your background was a bit whiter so that the box would stand out more. |
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02/02/2003 01:42:51 AM |
| Great creative idea and good composition. I don't really care for the lighting, which causes greyness on your working surface (but that's just me). Perhaps a different color background would improve this for me. |
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02/02/2003 12:02:23 AM |
| "Bah! Thinking's for squares!" |
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02/01/2003 11:29:16 PM |
| Nice photo with the exception - and you've probably heard it over and over - the "Thinking" sign is not cut straight. Really distracting - holds your attention - really stands out bodly. I hate it for you. Seriously, because without that it is a very restful and relaxing photo. Really like your choice of colors. |
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02/01/2003 04:56:10 AM |
| Maybe thinking outside the box doesn't make for a good photo. - Inspzil |
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01/31/2003 01:39:04 PM |
| If i get what you are saying in this picture the image is very nice ( Thinking out side the box) I think by moving in a little closer to the box you would have created a littlemore intrest. And also by using a different color for background would have made thebox stand out more. Nice Work |
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01/30/2003 08:36:56 PM |
| Cute composition, clever. I don't see any squares. Just kidding. I think I'd like to see the back ground pure white, looks a bit too dead. Good job and good luck. Jacko. 8 |
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01/29/2003 08:21:58 PM |
| I do get it!!! Nice composition, but the photo just leaves me a bit cold - perhaps different colors would help. |
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01/29/2003 02:52:27 PM |
| I like your picture a lot but there is something about the lighting that bothers me. |
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01/29/2003 09:31:02 AM |
| This is a well taken photo, but imo, sorta boring. |
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01/29/2003 08:54:27 AM |
| The card with thinking on it does not appear to be straight! I just think it would look better that way! jgillard6 |
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01/28/2003 09:38:19 PM |
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01/28/2003 12:27:03 PM |
| Too cute. What a creative shot. Bravo. |
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01/28/2003 08:19:24 AM |
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01/28/2003 04:54:29 AM |
| This is a clever picture which works on a number of levels. Although the individual components are quite ordinary (boring) you've brought them together to make an interesting composition to make a statement. Definately a good example of thinking outside of the box. |
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01/27/2003 05:53:12 AM |
| Nice idea. Shame that the lighting wasn't more even. |
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01/27/2003 02:26:56 AM |
| Not too bad, seems like you were |
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