Interesting, but under par in some photographic elements:
- I would have went with B&W. The colors do not add to the story and the background is full of blue-purple haze. If not full B&W at least eliminate the distracting colors at the back.
- The tree is, to me, based on the composition, the major element in the shot, not the oil pump. It's taking over the attention due to the placement and the size. Furthermore, there is no separation between the pump and the tree. |