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08/18/2015 10:31:39 AM |
*Hello from Sid and the Critique Club*
An appealing nature study that meets the challenge well.
The sky and clouds is an appealing image in its own right but the inclusion of the bird adds the strong focal point and interest. Given the nature of the challenge I like that the bird is relatively small in relation to the rest of the frame though challenge-wise I could easily live with it being even smaller.
There are a couple of things I have to add about it that I think would have helped it, the first is the composition, although it is not accurately central I feel it is too near the centre, I think for this challenge I would have composed it nearer to the bottom right, flying into the negative space to emphasise the vastness of that negative space more readily. The other is over-sharpening, the bird has a perfect halo all round it that makes it look like a cutout that has been pasted onto the image, for me it detracts in a major way.
Thanks for your submission, Sid |
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01/22/2015 09:04:01 PM |
| might have gone a little taller on the crop, both for composition as well as to reinforce the title |
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