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12/30/2014 09:08:58 PM |
Greetings from the critique club!
I really enjoy the idea of this image. I also enjoy the intimacy of the framing --it gives my eye a visual flow to follow. However, I think the picture lacks the clarity/sharpness that good focus could bring. I like the texture of the two main colors of the flame. While I don't think there is much you can do about it other than trial and error, the shape of the flames could be more balanced --the heavy weight of the yellow flame is overwhelming the shot and not adding much visual interest. I absolutely love the juxtaposition of the two matches; I think you hit that nail on the head.
Great work.
-Josh |
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12/23/2014 07:32:04 PM |
| Nicely exposed, but the focus is not quite on. |
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12/23/2014 02:25:16 PM |
| I think this was a great entry for the challenge. I love the capture of both yellow and blue of the flame. I liked how you filled the frame as well. |
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12/21/2014 04:06:38 PM |
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12/21/2014 09:31:20 AM |
| Nice capture, but I wish it was sharper. Looks like there are some halos already from (I assume) attempting to sharpen the image. |
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