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01/26/2003 09:43:52 PM |
| The shot is a little out of focus imo. Keep trying! jgillard5 |
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01/26/2003 01:41:30 AM |
| Poor focus and cropping really hurt this image. Hard to read the whole sign, difficult to generate interest in the subject of this photo. 3 md |
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01/24/2003 10:42:47 PM |
you leave me guessing about what you're trying to tell me.
nice color on the reds, and the white where the sign is peeling, but. . . |
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01/24/2003 09:40:55 PM |
| This looks like it was taken through the window of a moving bus or train. A crop to exclude the background at L and the bit of wall (?) at R would be a good start, followed by a dose of auto levels to give it some snap. |
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01/23/2003 11:08:08 PM |
| This photo looks a little over exposed - the black isn't very black and the red looks washed out. Also having part of each work hidden is a little uncomfortable. Perhaps you were trying to create the illusion that you weren't stopping (ie: were moving past the sign) however this thought didn't occur to me for quite a long time (ie: several viewings) so it's not obvious. |
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01/23/2003 02:29:30 PM |
| Interesting angle shot, I get the message, but obscured as it is, it's hard to read. The background "feels" like it's moving - was it a windy day or were you in a moving vehicle? (both guesses) 7 Swash |
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01/22/2003 10:59:45 PM |
| does nothing for me, sorry. It is the angle is not pleasing to my eye and the background seems a little too out of focus |
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01/21/2003 08:23:45 PM |
| The angle is just a little sharp. Box should have been in sharper focus. I personally would have cropped out the white pole on the right side. Great idea and composition, just needs better execution. Still a 6. |
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01/21/2003 03:26:29 PM |
| Cropping this tight was a good idea, but for me it needs to be sharper. It also looks like it was taken looking through a window, which has washed it out a bit. |
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01/21/2003 02:58:19 PM |
| A bit blurry and taken a little too close. |
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01/21/2003 04:53:15 AM |
| Interesting idea, a little out of focus though. |
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01/20/2003 07:49:05 PM |
| God, you can't even see the sign!! |
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01/20/2003 02:09:05 AM |
| I take it you were moving when you shot this. That would explain the blur. Cub |
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