Greetings from the Critique Club!
Very good message you're trying to put across here, Marcel, and I applaud the effort. The shot needs work mostly in the composition, the dof and lighting are quite good. First off, a level horizon especially as you have a liquor glass with booze(?) in it, which automatically gives us a colourful focal point to look for. So the horizon we seek, so we don't get dizzy looking for it, is the surface of the booze. It MUST be level. You also need more room, especially around the glass, as this is looking a little cramped.
Otherwise looks pretty decent, but as Bear mentions, the word 'Aftermath' is supposed to be the title. When that little flag appears next to a challenge description, pay close attention and read it carefully. Other minor changes I would make apart from ensuring the glass and its surface were dead level: I probably would have stretched out the handcuffs as far as possible from one another. Just to put some space between the keys and the glass. I also might have sought to focus on the fore part of the handcuff on the left, with the keys. But that's me.
Hope this has been useful!
Susan
Message edited by author 2015-12-13 19:57:38. |
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