Greetings from the Critique Club!
Guess who is writing your critique for Obscured...I like the idea behind this shot, very good idea to make the pic through a partly fogged-up car window. The swipe to show us the tree was probably accidental in how it mirrors the tree shape. But I think it's the white of the house to the left that cost you here, it's like a flashing neon sign drawing us away from all the soft magic you have there in the middle and to the right. Zooming in a bit to focus more on the tree through the swipe, but without showing the house, probably would have helped.
Keep at it, Marcel; you're one of those tough photogs who can be in the lower 50 for awhile, then give everyone a pleasant surprise when you ribbon. Just keep shooting and don't be afraid to zoom in, zoom out, get down on your belly or up on a stepladder (safely of course)...just keep at it, experiment, have fun and learn.
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