Apologies for the long delayed critique. I like your image it is very busy and cluttered but in a constructive sort of way, everything seems to add to the whole. I particularly like the recurring reflections in the phone though I wish the detail were better, the blown highlights are detrimental in a key area of your image. The edge of the screen and the batten behind the phone are also a little over-exposed and dominating but not excessively so. I quite like the processing I think it has added another element to the image. The only thing that is a little unfortunate is the positioning of the cat against the background image it is sufficiently similar in colour that it appears to give the cat an unnatural square look. Overall, a good result.
Thank you for your entry Fe, hope you had a lovely festive holiday and a creative New Year to you.