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Braided bread and Stilton cheese
Braided bread and Stilton cheese
snaffles


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Food In Black and White (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: 2014 Challenges 2014
Camera: Nikon D7100
Lens: Sigma 50mm f/1.4 EX DG HSM Autofocus Lens
Location: Chateau Snaffles
Date: Sep 21, 2014
Aperture: f.10
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/60
Date Uploaded: Sep 21, 2014

Just what it sounds like. The bread is braided together with three different *strands* of dough, one white, one dark, one middling :-) and the results are DELICIOUS!!!

Couple that with the sharp tang of a fairly young Stilton and you have a match made in heaven. Seemed like a shame to render it in b/w but here you go.

pp: shot RAW, straighten, crop, brightness/contrast, vibrance/saturation, minor cloning, resize, sharpen, save for web.

Statistics
Place: 43 out of 59
Avg (all users): 5.2000
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 5.0000
Avg (non-participants): 5.3947
Views since voting: 370
Views during voting: 149
Votes: 75
Comments: 3
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09/30/2014 03:48:31 PM
*Greetings from the Critique Club*

Compositionally this image works for me. I like that the bread and cheese are such a large part of the frame, and I love that one piece of bread with cheese on it. There was nothing I found distracting or out-of place in your scene.

Technically, I like that I feel a bit of depth to the light, and the darkness around the edges helped the bread and cheese stand out. Overall the scene seems a bit dark to me, but admittedly I tend to lean towards high key over low key, so it's just a personal preference thing.

I will say that the longer I considered this image, the more I liked it. I found the cut pieces of bread and the cheese looking good enough to eat, but the braided bread, seemed to be missing something - although I'll be darned if I'm figuring out what words to use to describe what might be lacking. It might just be the light. There are two spots, one on each of the darkest pieces of the bread, where the shadow is just really dark. I wonder if a bit more light in those areas might have made any difference? I also zoomed in with my screen to see what a tighter view might have looked like, and maybe a crop with mainly those cut pieces of bread and the cheese in your frame might have made a stronger entry? (With that lovely texture showing up even more strongly and then areas of your image where the light was really nice would have been highlighted?)

Your image certainly met the challenge. The only real difference I observe between your shot and those on the front page is the light. Other than that I think you had a nice shot.

Julee
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09/22/2014 11:06:57 PM
Looks tasty, but it also looks underexposed. More lighting from another direction to assist the soft lighting already there might have helped - this could work very well in B&W with the right lighting and processing.
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09/22/2014 04:59:58 PM
Still life is such an art. I like the elements, and the marble bread, but the composition and light both feel weak
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