Greetings from the Critique Club!
Initial impression: Wow, that is ONE. BIG. WHEEL. Fits the challenge descrip beautifully, I love the pun on *revolution*, but this was deemed only worthy of an overall 6 by the voters...? Let's take another look.
Technically: the lighting is good if a little glarey in some areas on the hub; comp is good, the crop eliminates a chunk of the outer wheel. Even though there are other wheels within it to see, DPCers seem to like a level of completion in what has been started. So to me, that would mean that the cropped-out right side of the wheel may have cost you.
Artistically: it looks like the selective desat may have been done a little quickly, on the topside and down towards the right. The sudden change in tones does seem to stop the flow from one component to the others.
Either way, you finished just outside the top ten so nothing to sneeze at.
Hope this has been helpful, feel free to pm me!
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