I see this model is still doing things for you! She and you should be pleased with this one. Lovely smile and fun pose. colors are bold and engaging, too!
She does look playful. Two things that I would like to see improved for me to rate this high. The fact that her feet were moving is a distraction for me and her face is reflecting the blue tint of the playground toy. 5
nicely done and just the right amount of motion. i would have warmed the pic up with a bit more orange/red, other than that nice solution to the challenge.
This is a nice photo but a bit too snapshot like. The focus is a bit off, and the feet are motion blurred. IMO, I think this would have been better if she had been coming down the slide head first. That way you could have made this a much tighter shot which would give more the impression of focusing on a feature, whether it be personality trait or physical trait, rather than the entire person. Just a suggestion.
This is a good shot. To be picky, I'd say that the sameshot, but with the eyes a bit wider, the feet still, and the horizon level would be perfect. Good composition and concept. The white balance looks a bit too blue, but that can be forgiven because of all the blue in the shot, which would give a blue cast with film as well.