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01/22/2003 01:03:58 PM |
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COMPOSITION- The composition in this one fits for what you are trying to say. Funny humorous execution. I like the blurring outside the window and not just sitting in a parking lot or driveway. You've also filled the frame nicely for the type of shot that you are doing.
BACKGROUND- I love the background in this. The blurred trees and stuff out the window gives the shot a sense of motion. Other than that there is not much more to say.
CAMERA WORK- Your focus and lighting is right on. The only concern I have is with the flash. It is reflecting off of his glasses and it draws my eyes there when I first look at the photo. So I think it might look a little better without him wearing the glasses, or to be safer a person without glasses.
POST PROCESSING- Youo've done great on your digital darkroom work. The colors are great and you don't have compression artifacts that I can see. Great job.
MY OPINION- I thought this was funny, I think they should do away with cell phones in cars for the most part. At least take them away from teenage girls :) Great job in the challenge. |
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01/19/2003 09:50:53 AM |
| Is this a real kit or did you make it up....lol good job. |
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01/18/2003 11:10:27 AM |
| Now that's using the old noggin. What did the cop say when he pulled you over? |
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01/18/2003 01:42:46 AM |
| Wow, now that is lone sexy and sleek phone! hehehehe... good idea for humor though it wasn't shot in the most attractive way. The way you have the subject driving and it's obvious by the passing outside is great... Also your composition is not bad though I might have liked to have seen a little more of the left cropped off, as the glare on the seat detracts from the subject. Good idea, I just think a little more thought could have gone into taking the photo, not just setting up something funny. -5- |
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01/17/2003 02:04:26 PM |
| how funny was the big red mark left on his head after he took that off? :) |
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01/17/2003 10:52:22 AM |
| I just can't look at this without cracking up! What an imagination you have !! Almost scary! Lighting and composition are good, and I don't even mind the distraction of the interior of the car since it sets the sense of "place". |
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01/17/2003 02:01:43 AM |
| I'm surprised your friend doesn't spring for the new surgical implants... |
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01/15/2003 05:09:32 PM |
| Very funny. The only thing that bothers me is the is the lighting. It gives it a snap shot quality. But I don't think you had much control over it unless you chose a different enviornment. Creative shot. |
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01/15/2003 12:18:09 AM |
| This guy looks a bit shady. Don't get too close!!! |
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01/14/2003 09:24:21 PM |
| Oh yes, I can just see this guy going down the freeway in commuter traffic. 7 This week. |
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01/14/2003 08:19:49 PM |
| I've seen this circulated in e-mails before so the initial first reaction is lost althought I do think I thought it was funny the first time I saw the concept. It would have really helped (IMO) if it was in a professional environment(i.e. business suit). I think the humor and paradox(professional v. hillbilly) would have shown through alot more. Thiek--6 |
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01/14/2003 08:03:12 PM |
| Nice gag! Looks real comfortable. lol. |
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01/14/2003 05:19:01 PM |
| Honest to goodness.....your mind is spooky!! LOL this is such a hoot. I have you in my top three. Very good, very funny. Hit my funny bone. I guess the shot could of been improved.....but I ask myself ......why? I get the joke and we see what we need to see for the humor. Nice job.......I like it. |
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01/14/2003 04:37:11 PM |
| hahahahah.....This is great. My 4 year old is even laughing. I hope you win this one. Does he really do this all the time? hehe |
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01/14/2003 12:08:56 PM |
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01/14/2003 11:24:45 AM |
| This truly made me laugh. Great picture! |
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01/14/2003 04:00:02 AM |
| Great...must be hard to push buttons though. :-) |
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01/14/2003 01:21:55 AM |
| I've seen this picture before, only the last time it was a black man and he was obviously wearing an ordinary uncovered rubber band around his head. |
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01/14/2003 12:46:04 AM |
| The scary thing is, this looks like a natural thing for you. LOL I love how it comes in matching sets with the antenae. :) Quite funny. The angle and framing/cropping is good. Focus and clarity are great. Very nice job keeping reflection and glare off all the glass in the photo. There is a bit there, however, it's not distracting at all. The lighting worked out nicely as well. Nothing too bright, nothing too dark. Great creativity. Good luck in the challenge. |
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01/13/2003 11:19:46 PM |
| Funny idea, I like the motion out the window too. |
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01/13/2003 10:28:27 PM |
This joke has been on the web for years--
Need more original content.. :( |
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01/13/2003 10:11:45 PM |
| Cute idea.. I like the way the lighting helps draw the eye to the subject in this picture and their is good contrast, use of color and clarity in the shot. |
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01/13/2003 08:29:10 PM |
| LOL, not very high-tech is it. :) |
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01/13/2003 10:01:18 AM |
| Very stylish! I love it! The red really flatter's your model's coloring! |
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01/13/2003 03:58:54 AM |
| I've seen this one before but its still funny. |
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01/13/2003 12:29:55 AM |
| I'm laughing out loud, so mission accomplished. Definitely a good laugh :) |
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01/13/2003 12:29:29 AM |
| Hey this would be a great nifty invention. Pitty it's illegal to talk on the phone whilst driving in my country. Great photo 8 |
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