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Remake of  "Timeless" Classic  (170276)
Remake of "Timeless" Classic (170276)
hajeka


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: DQ Deja Vu (Expert Editing)
Collection: 50-60%
Camera: Canon EOS-7D
Lens: Canon TS-E 90mm f/2.8 MF
Location: At home
Date: Sep 26, 2013
Aperture: 16.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/40
Date Uploaded: Sep 26, 2013

Still not happy with my editing skills, so there's work to do :)

Statistics
Place: 17 out of 41
Avg (all users): 6.0506
Avg (commenters): 6.5000
Avg (participants): 5.4500
Avg (non-participants): 6.2542
Views since voting: 360
Views during voting: 197
Votes: 79
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/03/2013 02:00:49 AM
Great remake - and I like this better than the original.
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09/30/2013 01:54:44 PM
Good retake - technically superior.
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09/28/2013 11:11:41 AM
well done remake.
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09/27/2013 08:48:41 PM
Voted earlier coming back to comment.

I like that the redux has some 'texture' to the ground that gives this pocketwatch a foundation to lay on whereas the original seems to be floating in negative space. There is more detail in the pocketwatch all the way up to the chain. Love the sparkles coming off the watch - a nice touch to keep because it adds zing to the composition. I think that both the original and the redux would have had a bit more visual impact had the chain come out of the right top corner. That way you would have the subject lined up on the diagonal letting the eye easy and naturally travel up and down the subject - from the beginning of the chain in the top right corner following the chains path down to the pocketwatch that is in the bottom left corner. Lastly, I think that this rendition would have even more visual impact if the watch face was oriented more towards the viewer instead of turned away- I would give the impression it is coming in our direction and also be easier to appreciate and read the details on the clock face.
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09/27/2013 03:14:13 PM
I love everything here but those specular reflections. They actually kinda ruin it for me. Still gonna give you a 6 for the good technical quality of everything else.
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09/27/2013 03:07:49 PM
Faithful to the original
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09/27/2013 03:53:04 AM
Well done! Although since this was Expert, you could have legally cloned out some of those dust specs. :)
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