Voted earlier coming back to comment.
Hmmm, the General's hidden DQ from the Games Challenge;-).
It remains true to the original with the "Keep off the Grass" sign. This redux has a leading line in it that the original did not feature prominently. The only thing is, is that dirt path/line doesn't really lead the eye to any element that would help the composition or play into/support the main subject. Maybe if the composition showed the corner where that path ends and a person (someone dressed in baseball outfit would be best given the location) walking towards it. Then that leading line would have something the eye could focus on and it would be another supporting element that would be a nod back to the 'keep off the grass' sign. |