Voted earlier coming back to comment.
Great silhouettes of the girls running and playing in the water fountains. Love how the light illuminates them - like crystal spires gleaming with the kiss of the sunlight. Given the title and that the core of your main subject is off to the right side of the composition I think it would suit it better if it was cropped closer to showcase what you want your audience to see. Cropping out 40% off the left and cropping closer to the girl 'kissing' the sun would give a tight vertical composition that would allow your main subject to take center stage. |