Since I'm giving this a rather low score, I feel I ow you an explanation on the reason why.
A few points seem to be missed during the execution of this photograph.
I would preferred a focus on the eye itself instead of on the lashes at the bottom right.
The ring flash's distracting. I understand you've used a ring flash because of the macro. But somehow I would have preferred seeing the reflection of a softbox. Or...the ring flash which was centred around the pupil. Don't know what effect this would have given; it's just an idea you know. But one I'm not totally convinced of myself.
Your WB looks also off; as if you've shot this under a UV light.
Perhaps all these points were intentional. In this case I'm really ridiculing myself now. If not intentional then this is worth giving it another try. I do hope I'm not offending you with all this. |
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