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01/16/2003 08:39:29 PM |
Critique Club
Composition-content
Although I a not usually a fan of this kind of picture, I thought that yours was original and had a strong impact. Your room must be a pretty interesting place! Your composition seems pretty perfect to me, good cropping and only contains the essential�@info. Perhaps a tiny bit more space on the right of the picture to include the edge of the fingertips, but this doesn't really effect the image.
Background
Background colour is good here and complements the image. There is nothing distracting in the background and it sets the figures off well.
Technical
Overall focus seems a little soft, cause of the obvious low light situation and the aperture of 2.8. Paerhaps having a slower shutter speed would have compensated and abled you to use an aperture with more depth of field. I think that the colour cast on this picture is one of the strong points, really adds to the atmosphere.
My Opinion
I think that you did a great job with this, very original and could easily imagine this being used as an album cover, unfortunately don't know the song but I can imagine that this would fit well. Hope that this helps and Good Luck in the next challenge! |
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01/11/2003 12:52:28 PM |
| And what a beautiful couple they make!! I think the skin tones could have been a little better. ;-) 6 |
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01/10/2003 10:04:47 PM |
| What a hoot!..great job and use of colors adds to the theme. Well done. |
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01/09/2003 09:07:59 PM |
| really fits the title well, nice job. |
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01/08/2003 08:44:06 PM |
| sexy! Thanks for the chuckles. |
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01/08/2003 04:36:09 PM |
| Yeah, that's a pretty cool picture. |
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01/08/2003 12:39:31 AM |
Cute idea but the pink hues threw me off instantly. It is too bright that it almost hurts the eyes to look at.3.
Take my comments for what they are worth for I am just a novice with a new camera. Dodo |
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01/06/2003 07:59:06 PM |
| Good interpretation of the song. The blue shadows kind of bother me, but it doesn't take away from the overall effect of the shot. Your focus and clarity are ok. The fuzzy parts of the coats seem a tad soft on the focus, not again, nothing serious. Nice shot for the challenge. Good luck. |
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01/06/2003 06:31:51 PM |
| hope you did the right thing and put the bodies back when you were done taking pictures. |
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01/06/2003 04:19:03 PM |
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