This would be a fine shot as an ad for a mortgage product but there is so much background that sets up a relationship with the couple and the background that it steals some of the thunder from the couple as a pair. It becomes a relationship between them and the building. A tighter crop, even at a loss of the back of his shoulder and her hair to go portrait orientation would simplify and strengthen the image for this challenge.
PS this comment is given in relation to the request for comment in the minimal editing portrait thread. |