The couple on the left works for me as they tell a story. The women on the right seems to be looking right at you and the story is now about you the photographer. Maybe a crop to just the couple would be a more powerful image.
I'm going through the entries, stopping at those images I feel have had the benefit of an unconventional eye and dwelling a little longer to try to see and appreciate what you saw. This is one of those images.
Positives: Great candid capture - excellent contrast in characters that conspires to give a lovely slice of life. I really like the tone of the people and the smile/look of the young lady.
Critical stuff: The tones of the background and the chairs are a bit flat; I think I'd have been tempted to boost the contrast a little in those areas. I also think you could chop a bit from the left hand side.
Overall: This is a fine image that I have enjoyed very much.
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