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09/07/2012 04:35:31 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club:
Great technicals here in terms of focus exposure etc but the apparent tilt is problematic as is the cropping of her knee and finger. They are a great couple and this is a really good picture of them but they do dominate the scene; we see the tracks but you make us not care, your composition asks us not to look - "look at the people please". I suspect your score would have been fairly similar if you took this same scene without the couple; that give's you a sense of what they have brought to the scene.
Without them, you had many processing possibilities; with them, your kind of compelled to treated them with some (editing) respect. They limit your options for getting creative.
Just some thoughts...
Regards
Paul |
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09/04/2012 08:22:31 AM |
| Very cute. I really like this idea. |
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09/04/2012 07:22:52 AM |
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08/30/2012 05:47:40 PM |
| I hope so for them, so cute |
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08/29/2012 08:15:12 AM |
| Nice light and color but the composition is confusing. |
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08/29/2012 02:30:10 AM |
not if a train comes along though....lol
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