Critique Club Comment :o)
Composition:
The building itself is reasonably clear, but the tree on the left is quite distracting, especially since its obscuring one of the windows - taking the shot a tiny bit more to the right would really have helped.
Background:
The night sky makes the top part of this shot seem very flat, almost making the building seem like a backdrop to a movie set, which both works for and against this shot. The foreground path and paving lead the eye in a bit, but to me they seem to lead my eye to the tree :o)
Camera Work:
The DoF on this shot is very deep, keeping everything in focus. Obviously you didn't light this yourself, but perhaps shooting from a position over to the right more would help make the lights there work for you more, lessening the impact of the shadows.
Post-Processing:
Since you've not provided any details, I can only guess at any post-processing work that you have done. The colour balance on this shot is very orangey, probably due to the lighting there as much as anything - perhaps adjusting the levels to make the shot more white would help exaggerate the contrast between the building and the night sky.
My Opinion:
This is a reasonable shot, but with several minor distractions. As for whether a photo of the Alamo can signify "Travel" or not I'm not sure - I personally would class this as a travel destination rather than travel itself, which may be why this shot didn't score as highly as it could have done.
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