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Challenge: Natural Light Indoor Portrait (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Canon EOS-5D Mark II
Lens: Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM
Location: office qubic
Date: Aug 18, 2012
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/200
Date Uploaded: Aug 18, 2012

Taken at work, 2nd morning at the office, 09:00am, she cooprated with kindness and was very pleased with the resoults :)the idea came from similar photos i have seen and the strips went out very interesting on the wall,one her face and even her T-shirt was fit :).
her name is yulia.

ps:curves,desat,curves again,b&w,color balance-blue chanel,and usm.

Statistics
Place: 21 out of 60
Avg (all users): 6.0155
Avg (commenters): 6.6000
Avg (participants): 5.6923
Avg (non-participants): 6.1556
Views since voting: 576
Views during voting: 290
Votes: 129
Comments: 8
Favorites: 0


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09/04/2012 09:32:35 AM
Originally posted by FrankRobinson:

Hi Kobi - welcome to the Critique Zone!

My first impressions - this is a really nice shot. I have always been a fan of those who can get light to work for them 'photo-graphy' and you definitely have here. But it is a shame about the background. Why couldn't the screen manufacturer have made it a little taller?

Technically, I would have been interested to see this taken at f2.8 just to try and blur out those pot plants. Other than that, the focus is perfect and of course the lighting is what makes it.

Artistically, I would wonder how much to ascribe to you and how much to your model, but looking at some of your other work, either you are very lucky or you have a way of getting your models to give you what you need! This is really natural with a very nicely balanced composition.

I like it, like I said, it's just a shame that screen wasn't a tiny bit higher!

Happy hunting,

Frank.


THX a lot frank! this is DPC at its best for me! I learned a lot here.
08/29/2012 04:46:08 PM
Hi Kobi - welcome to the Critique Zone!

My first impressions - this is a really nice shot. I have always been a fan of those who can get light to work for them 'photo-graphy' and you definitely have here. But it is a shame about the background. Why couldn't the screen manufacturer have made it a little taller?

Technically, I would have been interested to see this taken at f2.8 just to try and blur out those pot plants. Other than that, the focus is perfect and of course the lighting is what makes it.

Artistically, I would wonder how much to ascribe to you and how much to your model, but looking at some of your other work, either you are very lucky or you have a way of getting your models to give you what you need! This is really natural with a very nicely balanced composition.

I like it, like I said, it's just a shame that screen wasn't a tiny bit higher!

Happy hunting,

Frank.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/21/2012 01:09:54 AM
I think the background ruins this shot.
08/20/2012 09:00:15 PM
Very interesting concept. I like the contrasts with the slight tint. Nice focus too. Well done. Good image and it should be top ten at least.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
08/20/2012 04:33:24 PM
Nice job on this shot. I like the color tone.
08/20/2012 11:29:49 AM
There are a few blind shots here,this one works very well in my view.7.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
08/20/2012 06:15:59 AM
Interesting take on the challenge. Not crazy about the colour but certainly different.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
08/20/2012 01:20:09 AM
The lines!!!!!


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