some PP work and a different camera angle could have done so much good for this image.
cropping out many of the distracting BG elements would help keep the focus on the family, setting them against the water and not a narrow strip with land and other people behind would help elevate this from "snapshot" status, and some level or curve adjustments in PP software would help with the lighting some.
hopefully this is taken as the constructive comment it is meant as - i was given the same advice here many times over and hope that it helps you with future entries :) |