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07/18/2012 12:07:31 PM |
| Oh, the freedom! Carefree and running through the grass with the wind in her hair, this child captures the essence of summer. The yellows add to that summer feel, but maybe they also lend the a sense of too much sunshine. It looks like it may be hot. Less yellow and more green would make the setting more lush, I think. Also, the look on her face seems a bit concerned. Perhaps it is the heat or the anxiety that comes from running at breakneck speed through the grass, but that expression is may be just a little too accurate. A more idyllic smile would push this result up considerably. Overall, great concept and well executed. Just suggesting a couple of tweaks that would make it better to my eye. |
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07/16/2012 07:46:42 PM |
| A bit more blurry than I would like. Also not a big fan of the color choices in post. A wider shot, or having the subject look at the camera I think are a couple ways to have more of an impact. |
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07/11/2012 01:42:54 PM |
| Nice idea, but technically this lacks. |
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