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Leaving California
Leaving California

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Challenge: Travel (Classic Editing)
Camera: Olympus E-100RS
Location: Ontario, CA
Date: Dec 28, 2002
Aperture: 3.500000
ISO: 100
Shutter: 0.001250
Galleries: Travel
Date Uploaded: Dec 28, 2002


Place: 5 out of 131
Avg (all users): 6.7421
Avg (commenters): 8.1818
Avg (participants): 6.7024
Avg (non-participants): 6.7736
Views since voting: 1619
Votes: 190
Comments: 12
Favorites: 1 (view)

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01/12/2003 02:31:47 PM
Hello Susie! Your photo was assigned to me in context of the Critique Club. So here it goes:

Composition: Very good. I like the palm tree on the left and also the open space to the right, where the plane flies to. It really shows "Leaving California". I think it would look even better when the plane would be a little lower below the tree, but that's only a minor issue. I guess it was hard enough to capture the plane like that.

Lighting: A nice sunset. It gives a good lighting and makes your subjects just silhouettes. I like it.

Focus: As GeneralE said: Very good focus on the plane. It almost seems to be better focussed than the palm tree. Well done.

Art: You met the challenge very well. As said above your photo really shows what the title says. So overall my "critique" is a bit short because I really can't see anything wrong. Neither technically nor artistically.

Keep shooting,
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/05/2003 11:44:54 PM
Very good picture, really clear, I like the color
01/05/2003 12:40:16 PM
Surprisingly good detail on the plane considering how long a shot this is -- well-done!
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01/05/2003 07:52:26 AM
Great shot. I like how you incorporated that tree on the left ... it helps to give it a locatoin; You don't those in Canada. Good luck. Love the orange colour. 9
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01/05/2003 12:36:18 AM
Just like a postcard!!!
01/03/2003 10:59:54 PM
Seems weird to have something ononly one side of the picture, would've liked to have either less of that or something else on the right. Still, good picture.
01/02/2003 04:25:37 PM
Good composition. Well done. High score from me.
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01/01/2003 08:42:55 PM
It's a nice photo though I wouldnt mind the jet being larger
01/01/2003 05:57:35 PM
Nice shot! Great colors!
12/30/2002 09:29:17 PM
simply beautiful.
12/30/2002 01:25:55 PM
WOW!!!!!! Great SHOT 10
12/30/2002 03:38:53 AM
Excellent colour and composition. I really like how the plane is taking off. Fantastic capture. 10
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