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Challenge: Mundane II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Nikon D90
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX Nikkor 35mm f/1.8G
Location: Bishan, Singapore
Date: Jun 6, 2012
Aperture: 8.0
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/4000
Date Uploaded: Jun 6, 2012

me and wife walked to the new park here in Singapore and found couple of spot for future challenge. Park is nice and I will go there if it rain hard. I believe water effect will be great.

I waited for the bike to overlap each other so that it didn't look so stage and its not stage. I was under the bridge watching them crossed on the other side. this shot not really for this entry but i like it.


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06/26/2012 09:37:52 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Composition:
I really like this image but I do feel the composition is a little off, I would have liked the bikes to be not directly under the sun, however this was a chance shot and not a lot you could have done about their positioning :) I do feel however that a slight crop on the right would be beneficial then the woman would act more like a stopper at that edge of the image and there's no real interest behind her so it wouldn't hurt the image in any case. Also as mentioned below it could use a little straightening ;)

Technicals:

The shot is sharp and exposure is good so no problems there at all.

Post-Processing:

Very nicely done other than the straightening issue, I love the colours and the sky is not over done - as mentioned above sharp as a tack as well.

My Opinion:

Great shot, very well taken and in my opinion deserved a higher score, although that said it could be that it didn't really fit the scene as there's not much mundane in the image.

Hope this was of some use, should you wish to discuss any part of the critique further please feel free to PM me.

Good luck in future challenges!

Mark
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/19/2012 11:52:34 AM
I like this image but not sure it really fits the challenge.
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06/17/2012 08:36:56 PM
What a beautiful photo.
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06/16/2012 05:00:45 AM
Nice picture that IMHO would be near perfect if the sun and cyclist would not be dead center. I'd becurious to see the left 2/3rds of the frame.
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06/14/2012 12:35:30 PM
Balanced, yet unbalanced. Offset, yet even. Great silhouettes, nice sky. I'm a fan.
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06/13/2012 01:41:51 AM
Love this one. Would have given it a higher score if it was straight.
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06/13/2012 12:29:15 AM
align the horizon/bridge to the horizontal, other than that I like it.
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