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06/25/2012 01:44:56 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Composition:
I like the angle you have chosen to take this shot at as directly top down would have meant a weird central composition or something similar, as it is it nicely fills the frame and is quite pleasing to the viewer.
Technicals:
The shot is sharp where it needs to be and I like the shallow DOF, exposure looks good on the fruit and again that's where it needs to be for this shot.
Post-Processing:
You were fairly limited by basic editing ruleset and I think you did a good job of sharpening and getting the colours to pop considering this ruleset.
My Opinion:
I love Corona (and Sun Del Sol :p) with a lime punch.
As for the shot, I think it's pretty good overall - main problem is it's a mundane subject that hasn't been really made to WOW the voters, in the eyes of the voter it's a nicely taken shot (and quite creatively taken) of a mundane subject, they would be expecting more fireworks :)
Hope this was of some use, should you wish to discuss any part of the critique further please feel free to PM me.
Good luck in future challenges!
Mark |
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06/19/2012 03:03:48 PM |
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06/18/2012 09:47:54 PM |
| Original idea, makes me thirsty! Neat shot. |
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06/14/2012 12:55:13 PM |
Now I'm thirsty. Looks quite excellent.
Though I must ask, what twist am I missing? |
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