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09/17/2004 04:47:43 PM |
Critique Club Comment:
Indeed, I agree with most of the comments below, and let me take this time to congratulate you on a 6+ score on your 2nd challenge.
The big 6 (as I call it) is not easy to reach imho, and says something about your photo.
The color of the flamingo is absolutely amazing, and the detail and sharpness (as I understand you didn’t even use USM) is brilliant.
Just let me say that this is realy a pretty picture, and I guess it would look good framed, hanging on somebody’s wall (hint, hint)
Now about some critique:
Yes there are still some things to say about this picture.
Title: I don’t think the title adds something to this photo. I am to lazy to come up with something better now, but it’s long and doeas not realy tell you anything more.
Composition: Good, you didn’t crop, this is what came out of your camera, but maybe, just maybe with a little wider shot, this could be even better. I guess you tried that, and you have lots of pictures of this same bird on your hard disk, and this was the best one, but I would still like to see just a bit more maybe…
As you already said yourself, the other flamingo could have been cloned out, and it would have made the beautiful contrast with the black background even more perfect, but I don’t find it really distracting.
Again, it’s a beautiful picture, and if I where you I would put it up for print, or at least hang it on your own wall.
If you have any questions, comments or other things about this critique, or are bored and want to spam someone just PM me.
Grrrtzzz
Peter
Message edited by author 2004-09-17 16:48:09. |
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09/13/2004 12:14:17 AM |
Thank you everyone who commented. I had fun at the zoo the day I took this shot and this guy was a natural photo subject. Kept staring right at me!
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09/13/2004 12:11:51 AM |
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09/12/2004 10:21:54 PM |
| Great shot, lovely contrast of colour. Fits well with challenge. |
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09/11/2004 08:51:47 PM |
| great capture, but it doesn't relate to any particular destination for me. |
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09/11/2004 07:41:27 PM |
returning for comments
This is a lovely image with great color and great clarity. bumping up. |
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09/11/2004 01:50:33 AM |
| Nice image love the colour |
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09/10/2004 09:36:37 PM |
| great shot, colors are wonderful! Great job on composition and detail...best of luck! |
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09/10/2004 10:50:54 AM |
| How cool! This is perfect for a travel brochure or ad! Great colors against the black background! |
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09/10/2004 12:20:07 AM |
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09/09/2004 09:01:02 PM |
| Really nice image of the bird. Great colors, detail, contrast with back ground, watchful little eye peering at you. Unfortunately, it would just as well be Chicago, Phoenix, NYC, Miami (probably more so, considering all their plastic ones), San Diego, etc. IMHO, the image needs to say something about a "particular" location. Others probably won't agree with me. Good luck with it. |
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09/09/2004 05:00:35 PM |
Have you thougt of going in for 'wildlife photographer of the year' ??
Excellent... |
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09/09/2004 11:57:38 AM |
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09/08/2004 07:00:24 PM |
| A classic Flamingo shot. Composition, exposure, brilliant colors and dark background combine for a true winner. A catchlight in the eye would make it a bit stronger. |
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09/07/2004 01:17:38 AM |
| What clarity and color! This is one of the top photos today. What is the reflection? in the back upper left? One of my top picks. |
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09/07/2004 12:20:38 AM |
| I love the color, texture and the nice tight crop of this shot. Really great job! |
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09/06/2004 10:49:23 PM |
| Totally and absolutely gorgeous shot. I'm sure everyone is commenting on the gray something to the left of the beak. What is that? This will go in my favs. Well done. Oh, meant to add that the title definitely needs tweaking. |
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09/06/2004 04:27:16 PM |
| nice colors..the composition is a bit off, but a good attempt! |
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09/06/2004 03:18:07 PM |
| Very nice shot of a Flamingo! Tack sharp focus is evident with the details of the feathers and the area around the eye. Not sure what the faint pink arc is in the background (reflection?) but that should have been cloned out. 7 |
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