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05/03/2012 03:40:40 PM |
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05/03/2012 05:56:34 AM |
| Hi Chuck, this is a good idea; obviously you chose the minimalism and the communication between simple materials: glass, iron, air, water(clouds). That was a excellent option. I do have 2 remarks that could advantageously impact the reading of your picture: 1) Transparency could have been better exploited, perhaps with a more populated sky (but you are not God, you are just Chuck) 2) The structure of the pyramid is a bit confusing (too many lines in too many directions), perhaps it could have been simplified by changing the point of view (?). However this is a good picture. Congrats :-)) |
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05/02/2012 10:29:59 AM |
| I voted 6 because the photo is technically correct, but it could be more interesting to look at : maybe at night, or using another point of view (from inside the pyramid, or closer to the pyramid). You also could have played with the sun reflections, or waited for another type of clouds (although they should not appear in a "straight" theme). Well done, but will be better next time : good luck ! |
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