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05/01/2012 04:43:55 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Not a bad shot and shows that you can hold still very well for 1/10...that's not easy to do. The oof fingers add a good frame, the light on you is a little hard but not enough to nitpick about. I would try to avoid centering yourself so much; possibly try this again but have your hands framing you at a greater distance from your face, as right now I get the impression that you're not too far from the lens. Try to put yourself at the right third but eyes as they are, dodged to the left. Should make for a stronger shot.
I see that you're new here and trust me, this site will teach you a lot - including how to grow a thick skin and put up with low scores til you hone your skills a bit more and produce stronger images. Which you will do, and I have seen good work in your portfolio, and I feel that you have the basic technicals of comp and lighting down. Now it's time to push the creativity.
Hope this critique has been useful, and feel free to PM me.
Susan |
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04/18/2012 10:23:24 AM |
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