I would have chosen a different pose and a different place to have her. I really would have liked to see this outside, but the blank wall works fine.
The sepia was a good idea because the original that you posted in the forums had waaay too much noise for it to be okay in color. Try a lower ISO next time. It's still distracting in this version as well.
You've got a great start there, it just needs some tweaking!
Now Sprite is a a cutie pie. I would had sat her on a stool instaed of the chair. However, her pose is so inviting that no matter what I am bumping it to 7
I think this is a nice shot, but I find the negative space too distracting, and the contrast on the model herself a little light. I find it a little too grainy also, but that's just personal opinion, and you could have been going for that purposely, and it's not a score affecting gripe :)
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