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04/30/2012 12:03:59 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Pleasant scene, and glad that the one commenter was mistaken, thinking the frame of the railings had been added in pp. Though I have to admit it does look like it could have been added later.
Good use of thirds with the boardwalk leading us into the shot, but once again it needs a bit more pop in terms of colour (without going overboard of course) and something in terms of a subject on the boardwalk to break up the scene and create a focal point. Right in that bend of the boardwalk, someone coming or going would have been great and given more of a sense of purpose to the shot.
You're dfinitely improving in terms of technicals, Adam; now's the time to start getting the creative side going and give us a little more to see.
Feel free to PM me
Susan |
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04/21/2012 09:18:39 AM |
| For me adding frames in pp was not the idea of this challenge |
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04/18/2012 09:11:28 PM |
| Looks like my kind of place to explore! |
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04/18/2012 06:15:40 PM |
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