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Picture Perfect Afternoon
Picture Perfect Afternoon
cowboy221977


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Challenge: Framing V (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Lens: Canon EF 70-200mm f/4.0L USM
Location: Restoration Park, West Monroe Louisiana
Date: Apr 14, 2012
Aperture: F / 13
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/125 sec
Date Uploaded: Apr 15, 2012

I took this through a wooden railing on an overlook.

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04/30/2012 12:03:59 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Pleasant scene, and glad that the one commenter was mistaken, thinking the frame of the railings had been added in pp. Though I have to admit it does look like it could have been added later.

Good use of thirds with the boardwalk leading us into the shot, but once again it needs a bit more pop in terms of colour (without going overboard of course) and something in terms of a subject on the boardwalk to break up the scene and create a focal point. Right in that bend of the boardwalk, someone coming or going would have been great and given more of a sense of purpose to the shot.

You're dfinitely improving in terms of technicals, Adam; now's the time to start getting the creative side going and give us a little more to see.

Feel free to PM me

Susan
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04/21/2012 09:18:39 AM
For me adding frames in pp was not the idea of this challenge
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04/18/2012 09:11:28 PM
Looks like my kind of place to explore!
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04/18/2012 06:15:40 PM
framed it is
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