Greetings from the Critique Club!
Very pretty colours and textures, nicely done lighting and you fill the frame, but this looks like a classic case of missed focus, and my guess - from looking at your settings - is that this is handheld; I suspect camera shake here. This site is very big on foreground elements being in focus; you also had a lot of other good things going for the shot which is why you scored relatively well.
For any kind of still life shot, and especially a macro, you really need sharp focus, and unless you are capable of holding really still, you need a tripod. An inexpensive one (try a big-box electronics store) will probably cost you $25 or so. That's all you need at this point.
Hope this critique has been of help, and feel free to PM me.
Susan |