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City Shadows
City Shadows
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Challenge: Urban Landscapes IV (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-450D Rebel XSi
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Location: Tel Aviv
Date: Mar 12, 2012
Aperture: 4.5
ISO: 1600
Shutter: 1/15
Date Uploaded: Mar 12, 2012

Symmetry, light and shadow, people passing around, a cafe, a stairway going underground, a bicycle in transit and an artificial water source.

Statistics
Place: 53 out of 127
Avg (all users): 5.7633
Avg (commenters): 7.5000
Avg (participants): 5.6833
Avg (non-participants): 5.8073
Views since voting: 226
Views during voting: 278
Votes: 169
Comments: 8
Favorites: 0


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03/22/2012 11:53:52 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

A very interesting and reflective with tons of potential. There is a lot going on here but it doesn't feel cluttered, it feels very crisp and clean. The silhouettes work well here as they are almost more revealing than seeing the faces of the people. The rectangles give a nice flow to the shot and continuity. The blurred cyclist is a little bit too centred, about another second later and she's be farther to the right, helping balance the human figures already on the left. However at least she has lots of room to bike into :-)

I wouldn't have minded seeing this from either an elevated or lowered POV. To me those rectangles are almost screaming to be shot from ground level (or as close as you can get). but that's just me. Still, don't be afraid to experiment. Louie (' . substr('//www.dpchallenge.com/images/user_icon/21.gif', strrpos('//www.dpchallenge.com/images/user_icon/21.gif', '/') + 1) . ' lobrin) used some form of elevated walkway to advantage to shoot down at his subject in Memory Lane, which added greatly to the shot; the reverse, in this situation, could make a much more dynamic image. Consider reshooting if feasible, for fun and the experience.

Feel free to PM me,

Susan
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03/21/2012 06:35:16 AM
I thought this would have done better. Very well composed and you can feel the urban energy.

Message edited by author 2012-03-21 16:55:10.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/20/2012 09:38:00 PM
great energy and color
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03/20/2012 05:28:45 AM
Original idea, 8
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03/17/2012 12:17:57 PM
Reminds me of an artistic or computer-generated rendition of future contruction. Interesting.
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03/15/2012 08:44:19 PM
Cool colors. Love the reflection. A good shot.
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03/14/2012 06:14:46 PM
Love it! In my Top 10. I wonder if it makes Top 10 of the challenge.
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03/14/2012 09:38:29 AM
Perfectly composed, you captured the essence of this architecture,
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